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| entry= 1. You turn your <item> and ethereal strands coalesce into a vanity screen before you! It grows opaque as it stretches to encircle you, then blinks out of existence, revealing new surroundings! |
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2. A vanity screen stretched into a circular form appears without warning, then promptly folds itself up and vanishes to reveal Person, her hand slipping away from her <item>. |
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3. Person turns her <item> and an ethereal vanity screen forms in front of her! It encircles her, growing increasingly opaque until fully obscuring her, then disappears to reveal that she's gone! |
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4. As you turn your <item>, the ground beneath you gives way! The world blurs as you fall, but before you know it, your feet touch down and you find yourself somewhere else... |
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5. Person appears to fall from the sky, clinging to his <item>, then briefly stumbles as he lands with a discombulated expression. |
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6. Person touches his <item> and a black void opens beneath him, sending him plummeting! Just as the tip of his head disappears beneath ground level, the void vanishes without a trace! |
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| name= Obelin |
| name= Obelin |
Revision as of 19:05, 30 September 2022
Have you ever wanted to update your transport item to FWI to have a little bit more flare? Well, now's your chance to design some!! Here are the requirements: 1. Design 1st person transport messaging (no more than 200 characters). 2. Design 3rd person arrival messaging (no more than 200 characters). 3. Design 3rd person departure messaging (no more than 200 characters).. 4. Design a second 1st person transport messaging (same rules as 1). 5. Design 3rd person arrival messaging (to go with #4 and same rules as 2). 6. Design 3rd person departure messaging (to go with #4 sane same rules as 3). 7. Messaging must include <item> in the messaging. Example of a Submission: 1. You give your <item> a gentle turn and before you can blink, your surroundings have instantly changed 2. Person suddenly appears out of nowhere, one hand moving away from her <item>.. 3. Person reaches for her <item> and vanishes as soon as her fingers touch it! 4. Different 1st person messaging than 1. 5. 3rd person messaging that matches 4. 6. 3rd person messaging that matches 4. 7. All messaging includes <item>. Entries that do not include all requirements and follow the guidelines will not be considered eligible. Contestants have until 11:59 p.m. PT on July 31, 2022 to get entries to me. Ten winners will be chosen from the submitted entries. Like all Premium Monthly Contests, entries are subject to change based on the discretion of the GMs and QC. Entries will be judged during the first week of August. Zoelle will not judge this contest except in the rare case of a tie. The winners will be announced as soon as possible afterwards. Zoelle reserves the right to make any changes to items that she, or QC, deems necessary. Please direct any questions to the Premium Contests folder on the official message boards. REMINDERS: THERE IS NO GUARANTEE ANY WINNING ITEM WILL BE CREATED IN GAME! ~Zoelle~
Winners
Top Ten Winners, in alphabetical order:
- Aubriella
- Celothor
- Fleurs
- Julistae
- Kayse
- Maleisse
- Nadale
- Nelesune
- Ordim
- Teveriel
Entries
1. You turn your <item> and ethereal strands coalesce into a vanity screen before you! It grows opaque as it stretches to encircle you, then blinks out of existence, revealing new surroundings! 2. A vanity screen stretched into a circular form appears without warning, then promptly folds itself up and vanishes to reveal Person, her hand slipping away from her <item>. 3. Person turns her <item> and an ethereal vanity screen forms in front of her! It encircles her, growing increasingly opaque until fully obscuring her, then disappears to reveal that she's gone! 4. As you turn your <item>, the ground beneath you gives way! The world blurs as you fall, but before you know it, your feet touch down and you find yourself somewhere else... 5. Person appears to fall from the sky, clinging to his <item>, then briefly stumbles as he lands with a discombulated expression. 6. Person touches his <item> and a black void opens beneath him, sending him plummeting! Just as the tip of his head disappears beneath ground level, the void vanishes without a trace!
1. The moment you touch your <item>, your surroundings fracture and multiply, spinning rapidly into impossible geometry. As quickly as it began the process reverses, leaving you standing elsewhere. 2. A pinprick of light appears nearby, only to rapidly unfold from nothing into a passable likeness of <character> with hand resting on <item>, before taking on a more substantial reality. 3. As <character> touches <item>, countless mirror images extend infinitely into a corridor stretching beyond the horizon. The images bend and fold until they vanish, leaving no trace of the original. 4. Placing your hand atop <item> and humming a simple six note tune summons an abrupt wind carrying the remainder of the song, and instantly replacing your surroundings with someplace new. 5. A faint tune carries through the air as though from a great distance, and a gentle breeze swirls nothing but dust motes in the air. <Character> brushes <item> clean. How long has <he/she> been here? 6. Hand atop <item>, <Character> hums the beginning of a tune. Sudden stinging wind causes you to blink, but you hear their song retreat into the distance.
1. As you reach for your ITEM, a giant puma leaps toward you, knocking you out. When you come to and slowly rise, you realize your surroundings have changed. 2. PERSON's body fades in on the ground, his fingers resting on his ITEM. He regains consciousness and rises slowly, looking somewhat disoriented. 3. As PERSON reaches for his ITEM, a giant puma leaps toward him, knocking him out. The puma just as quickly disappears, and the body of PERSON fades away. 4. You give your ITEM a quick turn, and an iridescent rainbow wraps around you, fully encasing your body. When it unwinds, you find your surroundings have changed. 5. An iridescent rainbow suddenly appears, quickly unwinding to reveal PERSON moving her hand from her ITEM. 6. As PERSON gives her ITEM a quick turn, an iridescent rainbow wraps around her. The rainbow fades, leaving no trace of PERSON.